Friday, 12 April 2019

Bananas Alliteration Poem

Bananas
Alliteration Poem

  1. Bananas are bold and bare.
  2. Bananas backup other bananas.
  3. Black and blue bananas breath heavy.
  4. Bananas bounce all over the black road.
  5. Bad bananas always get blackmailed.
  6. Bananas are bruised and need bandages.
  7. Brown bananas go to banana heaven.
  8. Bananas enemies are blueberries and blackberries.
  9. Birds eat bananas when it’s a blackout.
  10. Baby bananas are bad but good.
  11. Bananas bleed brown stuff.
Bananas always become the bananas.

This week I have been doing my free choice writing about a
alliteration poem. 
I am happy with my poem, because it has bananas in it and I love
bananas.
I also found my poem hard, and challenging, because it took so long to complete it.
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 April 2019 at 10:41

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  2. Anonymous12 April 2019 at 10:47

    Hi Isabella
    Nice job you're poem is awesome maybe next time you could try to write more B words other then that amazing job.

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    1. Anonymous6 May 2019 at 12:44

      Sure Portia! I will write more next time I make a alliteration poem!

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  3. Anonymous12 April 2019 at 11:00

    Hi Isabella,
    Amazing job on your poem.
    I think that the strongest part of your work is the frist line!
    Next time maybe try and get a bit more b words!
    But other than that your poem is amazing!
    Maddy.😀😀😀

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    1. Anonymous6 May 2019 at 12:45

      Thank you for the feedback Maddy! Really appreciate it!

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