Your poem is just Amazing! I really liked the way you said "Lightning is Gods beam of light" Because in that sentence you used really Strong powerful words Some stuff you should work on is Writing more Powerful and Strong words Because Lightning is Strong and Powerful i think your poem is Magnificent!
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ReplyDeleteDear isabella
Your poem is just Amazing!
I really liked the way you said
"Lightning is Gods beam of light"
Because in that sentence you used really Strong powerful words
Some stuff you should work on is
Writing more Powerful and Strong words Because Lightning is Strong and Powerful i think your poem is Magnificent!
Feel free to comment on my Blog Post!
(Copy this link into a tab)
http://www.google.com/url?q=http%3A%2F%2Fodscarolinef.blogspot.com&sa=D&sntz=1&usg=AFQjCNGtd3IKRjCVgXHHNNZVyseoF1s2Hw